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lunatica

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4. It's got wonderful colors
Thu May 28, 2020, 03:44 PM
May 2020

especially in the sky. But my first impulse was to try to brush off what looks like chalk dust in the sky. But you might be deliberately creating that, although your very still water with reflections seems at odds with the turbulent sky which looks like it might be windy because of the dust. My eye wants to see a consistency of elements reacting to nature throughout the entire canvas. If you want to depict a windy day the water should reflect that. Everything is beautiful but my feeling is that you haven’t finished it.

If you’re stuck my advice is to not do anything until you know exactly what you want to do. Leave it propped up where you can look at it all the time, and not just when you’re painting. It will show you what it needs. Or, to be more exact, your own subconscious will tell you.

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I would love any critiques or help! I'm really trying to learn and get better. LiberalLoner May 2020 #1
It's got wonderful colors lunatica May 2020 #4
Thank you so much! Yeah I kind of messed up the sky.... LiberalLoner May 2020 #7
Your subconscious is your best teacher and friend. lunatica May 2020 #9
the thing i hate about pinterest is that you cant share the photos. mopinko May 2020 #2
Yup that's me! LiberalLoner May 2020 #3
I use Photobucket lunatica May 2020 #5
They charge to use it, though, don't they? LiberalLoner May 2020 #6
Yes, they do. lunatica May 2020 #8
hahahaha mopinko May 2020 #10
🤣 LiberalLoner May 2020 #11
I like them! Karadeniz May 2020 #12
Thank you! LiberalLoner May 2020 #13
I love that you can't tell this was from a photo. femmedem May 2020 #14
Thank you! ❤️❤️❤️ LiberalLoner May 2020 #15
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